You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter1. describe the training course you want to do2. explain what the company could do

Dear Mr. Rajesh,

I am writing this letter to request my Big data training approval. This training will be held on next month for seven days where most essential part of BigData such as Hadoop, Spark etc will be covered. Additionally, A certificate will be provided after completion of training, of course we need to pass the test for the same.

As your already know i am keen to learn bigdata from long time and successfully completed bigdata beginner training programme. Most importantly, We have few Bigdata projects in pipeline and hoping to get them soon. I am certain that this course will help me and my team to quickly start on new projects.

I understand my absence might cause impact on project deliverables and support activities. considering that i already had discussion with my colleague and he is ready to give his support.

Thanks for your cooperation and understanding.

Your sincerely,
Devendra Dadhich

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t for the same. As your already know i am keen to learn bigdata from long time...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Considering
...ct deliverables and support activities. considering that i already had discussion with my c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, of course, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89825789096 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701298701299 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.064449134 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210498084544 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818021626436 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063176550557 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124519307553 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850396957099 0.0580467560999 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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