You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
1. describe the training course you want to do
2. explain what the company could do to help me
3. say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
It is my pleasure to work as a software developer in your company. I appreciate your patience and assistance. I am writing this letter to inform you that I intend to participate an important training course.
It is an IT training course organised by the University of Melbourne. The training course aims involves a variety of advance technologies and contemporary knowledge, including three-dimensional print, artificial intelligence and a series of programming languages. At the end of course, learners will be divided into different groups and each group will be allocated a team project to complete. The training course will start on next Monday.
I would like the company to temporarily distribute my unfinished work to other colleagues, as I must spend the following two weeks on finishing the training course. The training course is extremely crucial to me, as I am able to drastically enhance my technical skills by obtaining the knowledge. In addition, my communicating ability can also be improved by completing the team project.
I hope that my request will not inconvenience the company too much. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
David Villa
Comments
Essay evaluation report
The training course aims involves a variety of advance technologies
The training course aims involve a variety of advanced technologies
The training course aims to involve a variety of advanced technologies
flaws:
No. of Words: 193 250 //more content wanted
Don't repeat words or phrases, like: 'as I...'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 193 250
No. of Characters: 975 1200
No. of Different Words: 121 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.727 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.052 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.159 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.957 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.69 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...an important training course. It is an IT training course organised by the Univer...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you. Your sincerely, David Villa
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29015544041 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23303606775 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9628527227 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5384615385 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29269435951 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100336188458 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530170439781 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161680205857 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778903595432 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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