You lost your car. you write a letter to the insurance company. In your letter, you should explain the situation, lost items in the car, and describe what you want the insurance company do.

Submitted by xun on Sun, 01/29/2017 - 19:44

Dear sir,

My vehicle has been stolen recently, and I have car insurance for it. I am writing this letter to ask for the compensation for my lost items.

Last week, I drove my car to the shopping centre in the urban area to stock up on daily necessities. I parked my car in the parking area of the centre. However, I forgot to lock my car doors after leaving the vehicle. When I came back to the car park again, the car was unfortunately disappeared.

Additionally, several electronic devices were also left in the car, including a computer tablet the price of which is around 2,000 dollars and a cell phone that costs approximately 1,000 dollars.

I would like the insurance company to compensate me with fifty percent of the expenses of the electronic equipment. Besides, I also request you to pay for my lost vehicle. I hope that the situation will be dealt with as soon as possible. If you require further information, you can contact me directly by email.

Yours sincerely,

David Villa

Votes
Average: 7.4 (3 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73863636364 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77177237656 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664772727273 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1358803179 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264585050235 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844233337736 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056149896966 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123477276467 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069651889381 0.0580467560999 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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