You lost your car. you write a letter to the insurance company. In your letter, you should explain the situation, lost items in the car, and describe what you want the insurance company do.
Dear sir,
My vehicle has been stolen recently, and I have insurance for it. I am writing this letter to ask for the compensation of my lost items.
Last week, I drove my car to the shopping centre in the urban area to stock up on daily necessities. I parked my car in the parking area of the centre. However, I forgot to lock my car after leaving the car. When I came to the parking lot again, the car was unfortunately disappeared.
Additionally, several electronic devices were left in the car, including a computer tablet that worth around 2,000 dollars and a cell phone which costs me approximately 1,000 dollars.
I would like the insurance company to compensate fifty percent of the costs of those electronic equipment. Besides, I also request you to compensate for my lost vehicle. I hope that the situation will be dealt with as soon as possible. If you require further information, you can contact me directly by email.
Yours sincerely,
David Villa
Comments
Essay evaluation report
a computer tablet that worth
a computer tablet that is worth
Definitions of worth
adjective
equivalent in value to the sum or item specified.
jewelry worth $450 was taken
noun
the value equivalent to that of someone or something under consideration; the level at which someone or something deserves to be valued or rated.
they had to listen to every piece of gossip and judge its worth
flaws:
1. No. of Words: 168 250
2. The content is not developed so smoothly. for example, better not to use two 'of' together in one sentence:
'fifty percent of the costs of those electronic equipment. '
3. Try not use pronouns as subject like 'I, you...' , or use them as less as possible.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 168 250
No. of Characters: 766 1200
No. of Different Words: 110 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.56 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.705 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.835 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.214 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.737 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82738095238 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82661643799 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8769538089 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262047063821 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833171709474 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583915602946 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120682986548 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718172462348 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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