You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
you shoud describe the training course you want to do
you should explain what the company could do to help me
you should say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to a training course for software developers that I have read from an online advertisement.
this is a 3-month course for programmers to upgrade coding skills and expand their fields to gaming developing. The course will take place in Toronto, Canada in June. it will provide all fundamental resources and knowledge for beginners in gaming programming.
As it is held in another country, I would be highly appreciated if you could allow me to leave for 3 months. During this time, you could organize online meetings and I will keep myself updated with the projects of the company and continue my work when I am away.
I believe that the training course will significantly boost my coding skills in the gaming field to prepare for three upcoming projects of new game titles in 2020. Moreover, I will be able to assist and teach other colleagues in my team what I have learned when I return.
I hope that you would take my request into consideration.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...e read from an online advertisement. this is a 3-month course for programmers to ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... take place in Toronto, Canada in June. it will provide all fundamental resources ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96703296703 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79330629851 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4035455763 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1818181818 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316366413436 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105626365661 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341532956766 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136253362991 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409371210673 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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