You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letterDescribe the training course you want to doExplain what the company could do to he

Dear Haiyun,
I am writing to let you know that recently I had come across advertisement about "Test Automation in Python" classroom training course. The course will offer hands on learning experience on in-house projects which ensure the proper understanding of the topic. This language will be helpful in enhancing my skill set as well as increase the test automation used in our team. I hope you would consider my situation.

This training class will last 3 consecutive days from May.15 and was held in another city (Beijing). Therefore if I pick this training course as my external training for this year, then the tuition fee and travel expense should be covered by our company.

In this three days coaching, every session will discuss different aspects to automation testing using Python. The python has been considered as next generation language and helpful in designing machine learning patterns. To involve automation test method in our team daily test activities will bring efficiency and increase the effectiveness and coverage of our software testing.

I am looking forward to response and approval for my request.

Best regards,
Haibo

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...5 and was held in another city Beijing. Therefore if I pick this training course as my ex...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33513513514 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80006261017 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67027027027 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7324461162 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17512103644 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606869916102 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478036836667 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103616878118 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056053354559 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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