You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letterDescribe the training course you want to doExplain what the company could do to he

Dear Haiyun,
I am writing to let you know that recently I had come across advertisement about "Test Automation in Python" classroom training course. The course will offer hands on learning experience on in-house projects which ensure the proper understanding of the topic. This language will be helpful in enhancing my skill set as well as increase the test automation used in our team. I hope you would consider my situation.

This training class will last 3 consecutive days from May.15 and was held in another city (Beijing). Therefor if I pick this training course as my external training for this year, then the tuition fee and travel expense should be covered by our company.

In this three days coaching, every session will discuss different aspects to automation testing using Python. The python has been considered as next generation language and helpful in designing machine learning patterns. To involve automation test method in our team daily test activities will bring efficiency and increase the effectiveness and coverage of our software testing.

Best regards,
Haibo

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oftware testing. Best regards, Haibo
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, well, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36206896552 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79095631961 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683908045977 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6059413083 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166381574647 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593846351951 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499505148599 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113585652237 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615775845039 0.0580467560999 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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