Dear Xiaoxing,
As we talked before on phones, I will go to Auckland which is in New Zealand after 2 months, and to start my study at University of Auckland. In the meantime, I would like to find part-time job during my learning period. I am writing this letter to ask some advices for the local jobs in Auckland from you since you and your wife already live in the city several years.
First of all, it is a two years study and there are courses at UOA from Monday to Friday. Thus, I think that I could do some part-time jobs in the weekend when I am free.
There are two reasons why I want to do the part-time job while I am studying. Firstly, gaining a working experience in foreign country could take some advantage in my CV for the future working purpose. Secondly, I can earn some money since my parents will not give me much pocket money as they insist that I should learn how to make the money at my age. And they also think that participate in the social experience is helpful and important for my future work.
Before I go to New Zealand, maybe you could help me to do a little research about what type of jobs are opened for foreign students like me as well as how much they usually payed.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Haibo
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, i think, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33195020747 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26821846385 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8954955193 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 4.34317383033 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298685298772 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101557982371 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966855558446 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155253305067 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074965534891 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.