Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The world is changing fast due to developed technology and social media. Owing to that, news are spread fast all over the world. Well-known persons are the most who suffer from media . In general, some people think famous people should have more private personal life but others believe that this is the cost of there success. In my opinion, I think everyone even if he is very famous should have a kind of privacy to feel that they are not under pressure all the time.
First of all, most famous artists and politicians in the world are complaining from cameras that follow them everywhere which is not fair. As all of us know that these people are very attractive and have a huge number of audience. So, it is normal to be noticed even when they travel out of their countries. As a result, people may gather around them if they have been in public places which is considered embarrassing in some cases.
On the other hand, a lot of people think that this is normal and it is their right to talk to famous people even if they are having special time. Even they claim that this is a normal result of their fame. In contrast, they consider not having a special time is the tax they have to pay in return to their popularity. In addition to that, some people start to spread rumors about these characters without a good reason.
In my opinion, everybody no matter if famous or not should enjoy personal life. In spite of some people are not aware of this, some programs should address this social issues. To be honest, politicians, artists, actors, etc. all these famous people have the right to experience normal life after working hours. Also, the government and other organizations should organize special times for these people to sit with the public.
In conclusion, people who don’t respect privacy of famous people must rethink about this and should give these people more time to enjoy with their families and friends especially in their holidays. The governments can take many procedures to make this easy and allocate some programs and activities to arrange some interview with famous people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7527173913 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35587567368 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497282608696 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3957802309 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.45 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237252431577 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777750091899 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516460904566 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146246716798 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259513194214 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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