You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbour has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Explain what the problem isExplain why it is disturbing you so

Essay topics:

You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbour has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you.

Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:

Explain what the problem is
Explain why it is disturbing you so much
Tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about it

he texts are authentic as they are extracts from magazines, journals, notices, advertisements, company handbooks, newspapers and books.

The questions seek to test your skills on:

reading for main ideas, gist, and detail
skimming
understanding logical argument
recognising writers' opinions, attitudes and purpose

Votes
Average: 5 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 26.3917525773 11% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 283.0 937.175257732 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 43.0 206.0 21% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.58139534884 4.54256449028 145% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.56074960203 3.78020617076 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09608171919 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 40.0 127.690721649 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.93023255814 0.622605031667 149% => OK
syllable_count: 76.5 290.88556701 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6804123711 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 23.0 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 141.5 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0373810343074 0.216113520407 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256579190699 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00627496208236 0.0603063233224 10% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0162014922769 0.12726935374 13% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239200200826 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 8.37731958763 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.88 8.71597938144 240% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.02 7.59969072165 158% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 8.15463917526 258% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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