Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the salad days of the millennium, the society is polarized into two groups almost equally. Regarding the notion that, whether media should stop to treated unfairly famous people or they should be given freedom to invade their private life. However, different people have their distinct mindset. In my opinion, media should work freely but they should not try to disturb anyone personal life. The following paragraph's would shed light on both the views and explain it with an apt example.
To begin with the first notion, there are myriad things to share in its favor. Firstly, famous people like actors, sportsman are these person who brings fame to our nation. Because of these persons our nation is well-recognized to all over the world. therefore, media should have to be news anything carefully about them. if they ignominy and this could read others countries people this also bring shame to our country. For example, famous indian actor Hritik Roshan has personal problems with his wife thus they divorce each other, when this news publish in media if brings very negative effect to their life as well as india. As a result, media should very careful about publishing anything, so that it can't harm their privacy.
Shifting towards the second school of thoughts, media should have freedom to publish what is true, either it's about rich or poor people's matter. therefore, it helps to bring justice in all class of the society. For instance, cricketer Rubel Hossain cheats a girl name happy, this time media publish true news about the incident, this gives happy justice in the court. As a result, other people who are victim can urge to win against bad crimes.
To sum up, I believe that media is the strong medium between criminals and victims. so, media need to play vital role for the justice of victims as well as they should not spread false news to invasion of others private life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
...amous people like actors, sportsman are these person who brings fame to our nation. Because ...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e person who brings fame to our nation. Because of these persons our nation is well-rec...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... well-recognized to all over the world. therefore, media should have to be news anything ...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... be news anything carefully about them. if they ignominy and this could read other...
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Line 5, column 707, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...l about publishing anything, so that it cant harm their privacy. Shifting to...
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Line 11, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... its about rich or poor peoples matter. therefore, it helps to bring justice in all class...
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Line 11, column 395, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...in the court. As a result, other people who are victim can urge to win against bad crim...
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Line 11, column 419, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'winning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: winning
...t, other people who are victim can urge to win against bad crimes. To sum up, I ...
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Line 15, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...g medium between criminals and victims. so, media need to play vital role for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90740740741 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19916666472 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614197530864 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3380431889 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285545299494 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810012665375 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723440388227 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169843927867 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854456542303 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.