Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemporary epoch, there is a heated argument over the issue that, information from internet is valuable and give multifarious benefits to people, but also in some reasons it create a problem to people. A lion's share of the society favors it, however, the rest goes adverse it. I completely agree with that, In my opinion, a plethora of news offer by technology is very useful for humankind. The following paragraph would explain the benefits along with an apt example.
I see eye to eye, with the central idea for various reasons. First and foremost, watching news is very convenient because of internet. This means, we can see and hear current news of the via internet in a minute after it happened. For example, people watch demolish of twin tower in USA seating their home through their laptop or smart phone immediate after the attack. As a result, they do not have to wait several days anxiously for news. In addition, technology also give information about examination. Thus, today most of the exam schedule and result published in colleges websites.
On the loggerhead, some critics go against the above discussed assertions. Sometimes false websites publishes news through internet. Therefore, it mislead people and create big problem. For instance, during a student protect in Bangladesh, so people spread fake news that, some girl raped at dhanmondi by political leaders and its lead riot there for several hours. Furthermore, some websites share advertisement about porn, if the used click there and started watching, then after some days they addicted to porn.
In conclusion, technology gives we many information daily, some are good and some have negative effect. but we have to more careful to use these information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13986013986 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70864175979 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646853146853 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1615999889 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189971577867 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532201688583 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351251476684 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111373487348 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276097136976 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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