The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays our mother earth is facing environmental disaster what needs to be taken care off before it turns to an alarming position. Some people believes that raising the cost of fuel can be the best strategy in to solve the issue. Although, I partially agree with this view point, but mostly I stand against as other initiatives should be taken to face the challenge in a more successful manner.
To begin with, fuel is being used for transportation purpose and we cannot deny that if fuel gets expensive then the working class, specially who are not well off will be in financial crisis to cope up with the extended budget everyday in public transportation system. On the contrary, the affluent group who are basically using a large portion of privet car and aircraft will not be having much problem to spend a few bucks on top. As a result, there will not be less car on the street and no chance of dreaming about less pollution. In addition, this step might push towards a better public bus and train service for the country, but it can not serve as the lead protector of nature.
The level of poisonous element in air, water and other natural resources are lifting up every single moment which indicates that there should be individual projects to save all the parts of the environment. For example, to fight against air pollution we need to avoid producing carbon dioxide and focus on tree plantation. Also, we should launch campaigns against deforestation. Likewise, restricting plastic bags and not using chemicals near rivers, lakes and seaside is essential to save the water and aquaculture.
To conclude, I pen down enhancing to the point that a simultaneous step to protect different areas of the environment will be the most effective approach to save our universe. Increasing the price of fuel is not the strong enough action to tackle this crucial situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...sis to cope up with the extended budget everyday in public transportation system. On the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, then, well, for example, in addition, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8691588785 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6862001846 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619937694704 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9191635405 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133640306169 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449388042516 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517617616358 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791224683717 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453353595893 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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