The best way to solve the words environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Nowadays, pollution is becoming the grave source of concern in all over the globe. To eradicate this problem, some problem assert that elevating the cost of fuel is the effective way, while other condemn about this motion. I agree with the lattter statement about which I will portray my view in the subsequent segments.
To begin with, some people deem that the augmentation in the fuel can solve the problem of contamination. Primarily, it is not a viable solution because affluent person of the word mostly use their own cars to commute. Therefore, if your price will increase it will cannot affect on the activities of them. Hence, the main problem would occur for the medium class people or impoverished people. Because, if the fuel cost will increase then the fear of public transport will also be elevate which creates a plethora for them.
On the paradoxical side, there are umpteen alternatives through which the problem of pollution can be solved out. The pre-dominant solution is government should make the transports which will use the natural gases instead of contaminated gases and urge their citizens to use these types of transport. A clear sample of this is, auto rickshaws which are run on the basis of batteries instead of fuel. As a result, it does not put detrimental effects on the ambience of the word. Hence, it is the first step to solve the problem of pollution. Besides this, it is the responsibility of the regime that they should aware their people about the problem of pollution.
To recapitulate, I reiterate my opinion that elevation in the fuel rates is not the proper solution. The best way to solve this problem is using the other types of transport to commute which are not run on the basis of fuel. Further more, I cogitate that there is a need to understand the gravity of the problem and address it, before it gets too late.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, while, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80495356037 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63498959459 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0190246787 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2941176471 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259615560014 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803055440142 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633430040425 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16096006218 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283919591975 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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