Your friend is looking for a new job. Write a letter to him referring a new job. Include the following:
1) Describe the details of the job?
2) Why is it suitable for him?
3) How to apply for the job?
Hello Mishu,
Hope you are having lovely sunny morning. you won't believe that I am going to share a job opportunity with that is close to your dream goal. this is for Pixer movies and they are looking for head of storyboarding for their next animation film which will be based on a character from Bangladeshi folklore. The job will give a wonderful exposure to you to the international VFX industry. Don't forget, it pays well and you will be able to run a team of 15-20 cartoonists, 3D model designers and architects.
The director of the project is preferring someone with your skill set, leadership trait and experience of at least 3 years in the local industry. As I know you personally, I am damn sure that you will be the best candidate for the position. I have always admired you for your creativity and leadership quality making it a point that this role will allow you to use your highest potential. Not only the work responsiblity but this job will be suitable for you because of the friendly office culture and future career growth.
if it is something you feel like you want to try then please follow the website of the production company I have mentioned. The deadline is approaching, so you might have to hurry. I have heard a big number of artists are applying for this vacancy. so I would urge for you to submit your best portfolio and try to see the director in person if you have access to him.
I can't wait to congratulate you for your upcoming success! please keep me posted.
Cheers,
Shahla
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Hello Mishu, Hope you are having lovely sunny morning...
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... with that is close to your dream goal. this is for Pixer movies and they are lookin...
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... you to the international VFX industry. Dont forget, it pays well and you will be ab...
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...sts, 3D model designers and architects. The director of the project is preferrin...
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...tects. The director of the project is preferring someone with your skill set, leadership...
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...ffice culture and future career growth. if it is something you feel like you wan...
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... culture and future career growth. if it is something you feel like you want ...
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... culture and future career growth. if it is something you feel like you want ...
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... artists are applying for this vacancy. so I would urge for you to submit your bes...
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...person if you have access to him. I cant wait to congratulate you for your upcom...
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...ratulate you for your upcoming success! please keep me posted. Cheers, Shahla
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...cess! please keep me posted. Cheers, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 273.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64240970069 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4270071003 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199868152665 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717857222173 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640962543565 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129564919921 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388563491557 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.