In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
some nations nowadays induce business owners to translocate from the urban and major cities into suburban towns due to a plethora of reasons. However, the question of whether this move has positive or negative impacts on people’s life is arguably the most debatable one. this essay aims to explore the benefits and drawbacks of such a matter in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To commence with, there is no doubt that moving factories and big organizations outside the main cities has many advantages. First of all, a conspicuous alleviation of traffic congestion during the peak times of a day. this in fact is a result of reducing the number of car users in the main cities. this also will lead to minimizing the pollution that arises from the heavy usage of transportation. Second of all, the translocation of various organizations into some regional areas will participate in increasing the employment rate for local residents. To illustrate, numerous individuals are going to work and even live in these places. Therefore, they will need some essential amenities such as hospitals, schools, supermarkets, hotels and many others to work in a proper environment. these services will create plenty of job opportunities for local people and also it will evolve the entire town's economy.
On the flip side, there are some few drawbacks that associate with such a translocation. Firstly, very poor accessibility for clients and workers. Since it might need to commute for a very long time to reach their destination. Secondly, the initial operational cost might be considerably higher. Hence, employers need to build up suitable residential compounds for their employees or arrange transportation services for workers or customers who are living in somewhere away from their offices.
To sum up, although the translocation of different companies and factories into regional areas might cause some limitation of workers and customers accessibilities, I strongly believe that the advantage of this trend outweigh the disadvantages. As, it might enhance the rural area infrastructure, create many job opportunities and reduce pollution in the main cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39650145773 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13470331371 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5385130723 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178147382025 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463594069858 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526261212198 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106375348491 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667199574313 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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