In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
The world of today is nothing like the world what it used to be a few decades ago. Constant migration toward the cities has become a common phenomenon all over the world. To curb this, authorities are encouraging industries and businesses to move to the suburbs. To a certain extent, I agree that shifting the base will be advantageous to the city people. However, I also think that it can create a few problems for rural people as well as for industrialists that can be taken care of.
Industries and businesses are the pillars of any nation and the main drivers of the economy. With their existence people are forced to move to big cities, creating a competitive world for everyone. Due to this competition, people living in urban areas are leading a stressful life. Furthermore, more and more people coming to the metro cities are creating havoc in terms of overcrowding and problems of housing. Nonetheless shifting the base will let some fresh air inside the people living in cities.
On the flip side, if industries and businesses can be moved outside the city and can create a setup in the rural area will be of great help to the local population. Although it can face some issues in its earlier stages during an early stage. moving to an area with low demand will not be profitable to them. Infrastructure in terms of roads, transportation etc. of the area can be improved by the government after the introduction of factories. industries can still have their headquarters in the main city and only the manufacturing plant can be shifted to the countryside since the prices in cities are touching skies as renting and building spaces in the regional areas are cheap.
To recapitulate, the advantages of relocating industries and businesses clearly outweigh any drawbacks. As long as, businesses are willing to accept, communities in big cities and regional areas will benefit from this change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87962962963 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86461489882 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0436759237 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247798264639 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803333587963 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738109916878 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159390992196 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599505142638 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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