In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In some nations, many domestic companies and even international corporations are encouraged to move their offices to rural areas outside the major cities. This essay argues that despite this helps to solve the housing problem in large and crowded cities, the substantially high cost to carry out far outweighs the advantages.
Moving businesses to regional areas is a good idea to address the lack of accommodations in modern cities. Due to a huge immigration stream from the countryside to seek for better job opportunities, many metropolia are now facing an extreme shortage of houses and buildings to sufficiently accommodate immigrants. Thus, relocating industries to rural areas will free up some amount of space in big cities for residential areas and solve the housing problem. For example, Ho Chi Minh City can now accommodate all of its residents thanks to companies moving their offices to nearby provinces. However, it will take a large sum of money if business owners decide to do this.
A major drawback when corporations opt to re-establish their offices and factories in other regions is the substantial cost they need to cover. Compared to the capital that companies initially invested in their current properties, the cost to relocate can be twofold or more because they will also have to pay for the traveling cost of their employees. For instance, Cocacola announced that it costed the company 500 million dollars to relocate its entire chain of factories to Binh Duong province and 100 million every month for its workers’ transportation. This essay believes that this major disadvantage will stop most corporations to move outside of big cities.
In conclusion, despite that the housing problem can be tackled, money is the biggest obstacle to move industries and businesses to regional areas and this drawback definitely outweighs the advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... cities. This essay argues that despite this helps to solve the housing problem in l...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'company'.
Suggestion: company
...ommodate all of its residents thanks to companies moving their offices to nearby province...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29765886288 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9900451158 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555183946488 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6545392921 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282225753868 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11420132023 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966924475315 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187820605125 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546157691674 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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