Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people think this development will have positive impacts. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the era of technology advancement, humans are radically falling behind when compared with computers in terms of intelligence. Some assert that such a development will greatly benefit people in the future. In my opinion, while the advance of artificial intelligence definitely has positive impacts on humans, several demerits should be taken into consideration.
To begin with, there will be huge benefits at the time computers get smarter than human beings. Scientists have proved that humans have a tendency to let emotion involve in making critical decisions. Therefore, having a superior intelligence to select the correct choices based on mathematics calculation is vastly precise and favorable. Furthermore, being clever also means that computers are much quicker in processing information and finishing tasks, which helps to minimize the time of any humans’ projects. For example, stockholders around the world can now invest in the companies selected by computers with full reliability.
However, if humans’ brains are actually inferior to computers in the future, there will be consequences which impact on people negatively. Firstly, there is a risk that humans will be no longer in control of machines when artificial intelligence becomes incredibly realistic. Instead, people will be controlled by computers in reverse. This seems to only happen in fiction movies, but it may turn into reality if the human race continues to be overconfident and lacks cautions of any possibilities. Secondly, a large proportion of population will face the problem of occupations. Since manufacturers can reduce the cost of producing with the help of future machines, workers will not be able to compete in the job market. Consequently, there will be a massive number of jobless people which is a major problem for governments.
In conclusion, I believe that the development of computers could have both positive and negative impacts on human race in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'superior intelligence'.
Suggestion: superior intelligence
...g critical decisions. Therefore, having a superior intelligence to select the correct choices based on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48852459016 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11814483259 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9148647772 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307277017427 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103972462893 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594017577425 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186974774327 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158255574079 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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