You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Give details of your study plans
- Explain why you want to get a part-time job
- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Terry,
How have you been? Hope you are in the pink of your health. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter to inform you about my enrolment in the University of Canada for the Supply Chain program and the best part is that it is not far away from your place.
Firstly, as you are already aware about the passion for this course and that too in one of the top leading universities, is going to be a thrilling experience. The course duration is of two years and apart from theoretical knowledge, the university has tie up with big it giants to let students experience the field knowledge as well that will help in gaining confidence in the real life work challenges.
Since you know the city is expensive and my family will not be able to cover end to end expenses like college fees, rental accommodation, food and other miscellaneous costs. I have to get a part-time job.
I was wondering if you can help me in getting a job by referring to your friends, acquaintances or colleagues. I know you have a wide networking area and if you do not mind helping me out with a job.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes
Dennis
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4331797235 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61195619994 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626728110599 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0773118872 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326137038826 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120274230017 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762183708783 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174877525334 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787706755952 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.