You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. in your letter•Say what job you have applied for.•explain why you want this

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. in your letter
• Say what job you have applied for.
• explain why you want this job.
• Suggest what information the teacher should include.

Dear Sir,
Hope you are in the pink of your health. I am writing this letter to ask you for a reference letter which I need to apply for a job. since you know me from my school days so you can give an honest opinion about me. Let me explain in detail.
I have recently been offered a Supply Chain Manager job at one of the reputed organisation in Canada and I would like to accept the same. Moreover, I have been waiting for this opportunity from so long owing to the reason that I want my family and me to shift from the place where we are currently staying. Additionally, I have experience in the same field and they want the person who is well aware of the advantages and disadvantages of the Indian market.
The company wants few details from my acquaintances like friends, family, teachers etc. so please include details like my participation in the activities, debates, symposium, active participation in physical activities like sports, cultural fest organisations. you can also add since how long we both know each other.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ben

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...letter which I need to apply for a job. since you know me from my school days so you ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ke sports, cultural fest organisations. you can also add since how long we both kno...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68911917098 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75900775921 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647668393782 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5584330901 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390111413139 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13394807416 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147650744435 0.0603063233224 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223447293186 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16994756282 0.0580467560999 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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