Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to ask for a reference letter that recommends my skills and qualifications in order to apply for a job.
Initially, I have applied to a sales representative vacancy in one of the renowned companies in the field of cosmetics. Since there are numerous numbers of applicants applying for the same position, a recommendation letter will significantly boost my chance to get accepted.
Actually, finding work rapidly is mandatory in order to cover my living expenses. Furthermore, I am going to marry my fiancee by the end of the year and I have to save much money as to be capable of affording the cost of our house.
Finally, when I asked my friends what the letter should contain in the furtherance of fostering my application, I was told that the writer should mention my communication, negotiation, time management, and team-work abilities because these are the main skills that the position requires.
Thanks a lot for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mark Ryan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, furthermore, if, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09195402299 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1718306977 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66091954023 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0798751619 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279563707051 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11142101874 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931328480858 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160006128478 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147680557386 0.0580467560999 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.