The perspective of developing the economic situation than the other aspects has sparked a heated debate among many. While some governments believe that thriving their economy is the most crucial type of progress to their countries, other people argue that there are another fields that need to be improved which are important as much as economy.
Admittedly, the economic progress creates prosperous nations which are capable of granting their citizens a convenient life. In other words, if the government have many funds that could cover all the basic needs of its citizens, they will have a proper financial status and will be able to live comfortably. Taking Switzerland as an example, its government not only offers a monthly salary to the citizens who cannot find a suitable job, but also confers a free education and affordable prices for food, water, and electricity.
On the flip side, economic progress does not guarantee a well-developed country that can utterly rely on its resources. To clarify, although some countries have much money due to their natural resources, they tend to import all kinds of food and equipment because of the lack of technology and education. One salient example that endorses this idea is the Gulf area, Kuwait for instance, it has substantial amounts of petrol that enhanced its economic status, but 80% of its population are having foreign nationalities because its citizens are neither experienced nor educated enough to manage their homeland facilities and institutions. On the contrary, Japan with its limited natural resources succeeded to be one of the most developed countries by accentuating on technology and education.
To recapitulate, however, the improvement of the economic conditions is vastly significant, in my opinion, governments should take the other fields in their consideration such as technology and education due to their prominent effect on the country's economy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38157894737 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92998131606 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9866653196 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.6 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197285851329 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775242497955 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516740655949 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125772916824 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548117793385 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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