Many governments think that economic progress is most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress and equally important for a country.
In this era of competition world the main focus of every nation is grow more and more. Presently, many administrator think that economic progress is essential for a country. By contrast, others think that other progress also imperative. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view, First and foremost, economic growth play phenomenal role to uplift the standard of nation's people. To illustrate, government can enhance the salary of working employees if they have hefty amount of money. Apart from it, in thriving nation, people can take much relief from tax side department as government put less tax on public due to the economic growth and the price of domestic things automatically reduce.Therefore, masses can imagine a better life under the economic growth of a country.
Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. Initially, it is significant for every nation to focus on the progress in health system and education system, unemployment rather than economy progress. For example, in my country majority of masses are unemployed due to less working facility and destitute people find difficulties to maintain their health as the price of medicine touch the sky, more education will definitely enhance the economy of a country.Thus, a nation with healthy people can progress more and well educated people with jobs will prove a helping hand for a nation if some changes is occurring in this field.
To recuperate, Undeniably, economic growth of a country help people in every field. However, still I believe that money is not important compare to health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
In this era of competition world the main focus of every nation is grow more and more. ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...world the main focus of every nation is grow more and more. Presently, many administ...
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Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun administrator seems to be countable; consider using: 'many administrators'.
Suggestion: many administrators
...ation is grow more and more. Presently, many administrator think that economic progress is essenti...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...of domestic things automatically reduce.Therefore, masses can imagine a better life under...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther than economy progress. For example, in my country majority of masses are une...
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Suggestion: Thus
...nitely enhance the economy of a country.Thus, a nation with healthy people can progr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gress more and well educated people with jobs will prove a helping hand for a nat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16296296296 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81280630096 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.904149853 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243912404303 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974146796025 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112330303568 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14341421915 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722178634405 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.