Economic progress is an essential part of the development of a country, and many governments even consider it is their most important objective. However, some people argue that other kinds of progress are as important as the economic progress for a nation. From my perspective, while economic progress is essential, I agree that other forms of progress, such as social and environmental progress, should be considered equally important by the public and the government.
On the one hand, governments think that economic progress is the most important goal for serval reasons. First, the economy is the foundation of a country, which makes other types of progress become possible. Without an adequate amount of funding, public sectors like schools and museums can not properly operate. In addition, according to Maslow's theory of demand, the basic needs of people like food and water should be met first. These material needs can be directly met by a country achieving economic success. Moreover, the higher-level needs like education and social recognition will not even emerge if people living in extreme poverty. Therefore, economic progress is emphasized by many countries, especially developing ones.
On the other hand, other types of progress can not be ignored. I believe that they should be seen as important as economic progress. To begin with, the obligation of government is to serve its people, helping them to live better lives. While economic progress is one of the various approaches to achieve this goal, it is not the ultimate objective in itself. If a country only pursues economic achievements but ignores other types of progress, the people living there will not likely to benefit from the economic progress. For example, some shortsighted governments boost the local economy at the cost of pollution, ignoring the environmental and social problems it may cause. As a result, people feel disappointed in the government for ruining their homes.
In conclusion, while the progress of the economy enables other types of progress, I am deeply convinced that they are as important as economic progress.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29289940828 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84750825823 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494082840237 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5957647823 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3888888889 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.552007172809 0.244688304435 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181176083434 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137158030023 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370155379808 0.151304729494 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634521153019 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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