Dear Mr. John Smith,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to notify you about some incorrect data about Google's CEO that you have written in one of your recent articles that were published by a renowned newspaper.
To begin with, the article started to describe how notorious our CEO is, by presenting some charts and statistics that do not even resemble the truth with a little bit. In addition, it also mentioned that he always tend to downplay all of his employees in order to glorify his efforts.
Actually, all of this information is based on some fabricated videos and sound records that lack any proof. In addition, he treats all of the employees in a good manner and appreciates their continuous efforts that result in an obvious development.
Finally, it will be really appreciated if you reconsidered the published content. Since you do not have enough evidence to accuse this person, you should write an apology which may help you to avoid any legal issues with Google's advocates.
Thanks a lot for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Abanoub Ghaly
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...t do not even resemble the truth with a little bit. In addition, it also mentioned that he...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... lack any proof. In addition, he treats all of the employees in a good manner and apprecia...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, if, may, really, so, well, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00546448087 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69223166168 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.554515435 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26856596358 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835327145352 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943300070462 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105661714299 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123806345323 0.0580467560999 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.