In recent decades, the number of obese people has obviously increased all over the world which indicates that not only are people not keen on doing any kinds of potential training, but they have also unhealthy eating habits. In this essay, I will discuss this issue and suggest what nations could do in order to overcome it.
Initially, Lack of practicing sports and the unhealthy diet are the most significant factors leading to this phenomenon. Since people are more hectic nowadays, they do not consider sports as one of their priorities. Hence, their bodies will not have the ideal shape or the best distribution of fats and muscles. Furthermore, owing to the people's rapid lifestyle, they tend to eat any kinds of meals regardless of the benefit of its ingredients. For example, people who spend much time at their workplace will not have spare time for any activities, also, they are not going to care for whether their meals are healthy or not.
Governments should take some tangible measures in the furtherance of encouraging people to have a healthier life. For instance, advertisement campaigns would be vastly beneficial to warn people about the importance of practicing activities. because if they do not exert a minimum amount of effort daily, the amount of saturated fats inside their bodies will increase gradually which are extremely detrimental towards their hearts safety. In addition, schools should instill the idea of usual training in the children's minds in the pursuance of raising a generation who understands well the advantages of keeping fit.
To recapitulate, the quick pace of life prevents people from either practicing any kinds of potential activities or considering a healthful diet. Therefore, countries should endeavor to foster people to have vigorous lifestyle even by raising awareness or teaching students how to avoid obesity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23920265781 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78034386856 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614617940199 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6902205772 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.307692308 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159906969155 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549232582505 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487114161354 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944136254836 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339724522928 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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