Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to request participation in one of the training courses that will be vastly beneficial to our company.
Initially, the training course is about mobile applications security and how to prevent hackers from accessing the user's information. The course duration is 54 hours which are distributed on 18 lessons for 3 consecutive weeks, starting from the 5th of April.
I wonder if the company could cover the course expenses because its fees are over my budget. Furthermore, I would request a short leave during the course period in order to concentrate more and obtain the maximum amount of information.
Finally, since our mobile applications always contain an online payment feature that carries very sensitive data, the course will help me to preserve our clients' information in a safe and secure way. On the contrary, if our users felt that their data can be easily hacked, they would uninstall our applications immediately.
Thanks a lot for your consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Mark Ryan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'applications'' or 'application's'?
Suggestion: applications'; application's
...ly, the training course is about mobile applications security and how to prevent hackers fro...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
...w to prevent hackers from accessing the users information. The course duration is 54 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22674418605 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9015006561 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703488372093 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9753862173 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25796285495 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952336679239 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522644615575 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134417177059 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651808428674 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.