You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to inform you about an IT training course which is will be provided by a local university. This course is totally free, because university tutors want to help their students, but its open for all inhabitants of our city. This course includes a lot of different chapters of internet technology and it is very useful for beginners.
This course will be held on Mondays and Fridays from 8 a.m. till 2 p.m. I want you to let me visit it, because it would be very profitable for our company. You just need to exempt me from my duties for that time.
As I know, there is now one specialist in our company that can create and edit a new internet web-site. For these purposes our company compelled every time ask strange organizations. As a result, these organizations demand a good deal of payment for their services, as we don’t have another choice. Instead of this, we would be able to maintain our web-site by us.
Thank you in advance for considering my proposition, I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards,
Givi Login
Comments
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to show my extreme interest in doing a course, which I saw an advertisement of in yesterday's newspaper.
It is a 2-month training regarding "Prevention techniques dealing with Cyber Crime" and is commencing from 1st of August. The slot I am planning to attend will be after working hours. The entire study costs for Rs15000/- and requires the applicationts to book prior by paying some amount within next week.
Currently, I am staying as a paying guest and as you know the rents and travelling expenses in this city are not that affordable. So, could you possibly provide me with an advance amount of Rs30000/- and that money can be deducted with reasonable installments per month from my salaries.
Attending the course, can help me aquire certain skills that can be really beneficial in understanding network security. I can also learn to tackle cyber threats and design strong policies for the applications that are deployed online.
It would be kind enough of you help me with this and am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Nupur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
... I'm writing to inform you about an IT training course which is will be provid...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd it is very useful for beginners. This course will be held on Mondays and Frid...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...exempt me from my duties for that time. As I know, there is now one specialist i...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...that can create and edit a new internet web site. For these purposes our company compell...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
... this, we would be able to maintain our web site by us. Thank you in advance for cons...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233183856502 0.220444632235 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.152466367713 0.167888034529 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0493273542601 0.0606518309736 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0313901345291 0.0506257000042 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.121076233184 0.118615021944 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116591928251 0.107062808482 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0269058295964 0.041066498444 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63538671885 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269058295964 0.0385302599488 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0717488789238 0.0714148451538 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0224215246637 0.0191574576366 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00896860986547 0.00930345855455 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1084.0 1141.60824742 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.134020619 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70526315789 5.53046319177 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3 0.284621296913 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242105263158 0.211203875043 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147368421053 0.133321485273 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0842105263158 0.0843313296314 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63538671885 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.622163163488 107% => OK
Word variations: 70.9346022017 62.8969750728 113% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8333333333 16.4300151701 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0712725709 44.7399317507 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 90.9928171075 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.4300151701 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.613754768223 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.09278350515 239% => OK
Readability: 40.0438596491 37.5504026743 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.23529411765 1.13073093955 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306199463927 0.331212695627 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0984977936593 0.0927372745006 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0569892695597 0.0736520305886 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568521534533 0.579516596996 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155694194994 0.180689518051 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114623531287 0.122183219658 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747485017979 0.0765303033291 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.162781029352 0.211926503985 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0792532915087 0.0737400523855 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204031858244 0.203819188451 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576356815265 0.067151250289 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.