Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbors.In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize.Describe what action you will take.

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

Write a letter to your neighbors.
In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize.
Describe what action you will take.

Dear, Mr. and Mrs. Smiths,

I’ve recently received your letter which contains your complaint about noise made by my piano. It was very unexpectable and I feel myself ashamed. First of all, I want to apologize and promise it will never happen again. Let me explain what caused this situation.

As you now I moved to this apartment only two months ago. I didn’t know about your curfew hours and moreover, I’ve found out that the walls between our flats are very narrow. I can only imagine how much discomfort has been inflicted to you.

I want to apologize for this misunderstanding again and inform you that I found out how to resolve this problem. I talked to my tutor yesterday and he promised me to find one rehearsal room in our college to let me prepare for my live performance. So tomorrow I will hire a group of students, they’ll help me to move my piano to the college.

Thank you for your patience and please don’t be angry with me.

Your sincere,
Max Gordon.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iscomfort has been inflicted to you. I want to apologize for this misunderstan...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... found out how to resolve this problem. I talked to my tutor yesterday and he pro...
^

Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'moreover', 'so', 'i feel', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.18691588785 0.220444632235 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.182242990654 0.167888034529 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0280373831776 0.0606518309736 46% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0420560747664 0.0506257000042 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.168224299065 0.118615021944 142% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0747663551402 0.107062808482 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0140186915888 0.041066498444 34% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.66471821034 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0467289719626 0.0385302599488 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00934579439252 0.00132118243153 707% => OK
Determiners: 0.0373831775701 0.0714148451538 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140186915888 0.0191574576366 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018691588785 0.00930345855455 201% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1005.0 1141.60824742 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.134020619 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71022727273 5.53046319177 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284090909091 0.284621296913 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221590909091 0.211203875043 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164772727273 0.133321485273 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107954545455 0.0843313296314 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66471821034 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622163163488 110% => OK
Word variations: 72.3571852537 62.8969750728 115% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6666666667 16.4300151701 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0019840707 44.7399317507 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 90.9928171075 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.4300151701 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.613754768223 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 36.8257575758 37.5504026743 98% => OK
Elegance: 0.702380952381 1.13073093955 62% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332576830478 0.331212695627 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0859510386701 0.0927372745006 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0766024786875 0.0736520305886 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581198084213 0.579516596996 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216920961304 0.180689518051 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115311524129 0.122183219658 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520969004944 0.0765303033291 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.141401483622 0.211926503985 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0566836809266 0.0737400523855 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153692430226 0.203819188451 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830095379768 0.067151250289 124% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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