You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about i

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You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

Dear Madam,

I’m writing to inform you that I’m not able return books, which I borrowed one week ago. The expiration date for return is tomorrow, however, I’ve recently received a call from my friend from Ukraine and he told about my uncle. She had a stroke yesterday and ambulance took her to the hospital. Her condition is still unstable and I am the only one relative she has. I should fly to Ukraine immediately to help her.

I want to ask you do not tell about my books’ overdue to our group’s curator, because he won’t understand my situation, as he doesn’t have a family and will probably fine me. It is very hard to find any extra money to cover such problems, because I’m a student and salary I have for my part-time job is very low. By the way, I can ask my classmate John to return books tomorrow, however, I will able to sign up in your journal only when I come back.

I’m very sorry for this inconvenience and look forward to hearing back from you.

Yours faithfully,
Max Gordon

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'by the way']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204166666667 0.220444632235 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.141666666667 0.167888034529 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0606518309736 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0666666666667 0.0506257000042 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.141666666667 0.118615021944 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0583333333333 0.107062808482 54% => OK
Participles: 0.00833333333333 0.041066498444 20% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.66402596302 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0458333333333 0.0385302599488 119% => OK
Particles: 0.00833333333333 0.00132118243153 631% => OK
Determiners: 0.0416666666667 0.0714148451538 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0166666666667 0.0191574576366 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00833333333333 0.00930345855455 90% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1049.0 1141.60824742 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.134020619 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67027027027 5.53046319177 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302702702703 0.284621296913 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232432432432 0.211203875043 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178378378378 0.133321485273 134% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108108108108 0.0843313296314 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66402596302 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654054054054 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 66.7644458952 62.8969750728 106% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5 16.4300151701 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4942264605 44.7399317507 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9 90.9928171075 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.4300151701 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 41.7432432432 37.5504026743 111% => OK
Elegance: 0.77380952381 1.13073093955 68% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352758682729 0.331212695627 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0900979292148 0.0927372745006 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0629279950713 0.0736520305886 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.55749647423 0.579516596996 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183897296426 0.180689518051 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147203711935 0.122183219658 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597154163016 0.0765303033291 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305687945566 0.211926503985 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0609191167954 0.0737400523855 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255863530754 0.203819188451 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456541983007 0.067151250289 68% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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