You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Librarian,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am have borrowed Cambridge General Ielts book 14 from the library , the due date of the book was until September 14. Unluckily, I am unable to return the book within the time limit due to an emergency job.
Elucidating in detail, I got an immediate call from my parents as they were already went a few days ago to take care of my grandmother who is in the hospital. Besides, I have to book the flight tickets to leave to Ahmedabad where my grandmother is admitted in the government hospital.. Meanwhile, I forget the due dates of the books upon checking my recipet I have noticed that i will not be present during this time to get back it to the liabrary.
Furthermore, I ask you not to levy any charge to my account with any late fees. Likewise, all this has happened suddenly that I have not get enough time to handover to any of my friend to return it on the specified time. In other words, I suggest you to coöperate with me in this hard situation as well as compassionate enough to understand my problem.
Lastly, I will assure you that I as soon as I will arrive back I will foremost deposit the book in the library.
I hope you will address these concerns as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Jasmine
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ing this letter to inform you that I am have borrowed Cambridge General Ielts book 1...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...borrowed Cambridge General Ielts book 14 from the library , the due date of the b...
^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... General Ielts book 14 from the library , the due date of the book was until Sept...
^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...r is admitted in the government hospital.. Meanwhile, I forget the due dates of th...
^^
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the books upon checking my recipet I have noticed that i will not be present...
^^
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...checking my recipet I have noticed that i will not be present during this time t...
^^
Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ecking my recipet I have noticed that i will not be present during this time to...
^
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is time to get back it to the liabrary. Furthermore, I ask you not to levy any ...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Furthermore, I ask you not to levy any charge to my account with any late fees...
^^
Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... levy any charge to my account with any late fees. Likewise, all this has happen...
^^
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...s has happened suddenly that I have not get enough time to handover to any of my fr...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, lastly, likewise, so, well, while, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50210970464 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63363610272 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561181434599 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7546110095 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2272221181 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835084471362 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419698063021 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120436743811 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417005681271 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.