n some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on t
In the bygone days, irrespective of time people had freedom to commute in their nearby places or distant places even for a prolonged times on foot or livestock due to lack of transport. Likewise, they were not afraid of any causalities and hard situations. Ultimately, as atmosphere at that time was safe and peaceful. Currently, some developed countries has put restrictions on particular age of people to not to abandon accommodation after a constant time such as in U.S.A. In my opinion this the pragmatic approach initiated by the government of these fully developed countries.
On the one hand, with the rise in alarming rate of crime, thefts, murders and shooting it is becoming public issue to safeguard the youth people from these social evils pervading in the society.Firstly, boycotting the toddlers after 9 p.m will protect them from such heinous activities. Besides, it will assure parents a security of their children at home. Simultaneously , bad culprits of the society are always in the fetch of new face to use for their benefit against society. For instance, many ISIS group members hack the confidential information of the users through their credit cards, social accounts and so on to make the situation worsen of the country and to take their revenge through installing bomb in the human body of an influenced teenager.
Moving the ball further, most of the young milennials in the regions of united states are affected by the drug addiction. Moreover, the greatest number of teenagers run out of their houses to join the clubs, parties and unethical activities.Furthermore, a large proportion of teenager dying everyday at a young age due to the suicide ,over usage of drugs, teen girls pregnancy, alcohols, family pressure and so on. Thus, this the method emphasized to restrict the children to go out of their comfort zones while controlling their activities as well as scrutinizing them to keep them away from futile things. Additionally, the children are like clay they can be molded to anyway as they are of soft nature. Likely, they can be used by victims to take advantage of them and after that sentencing them to death. This type pf activities took place in western countries mostly. Where number of child are rapped , kidnapped and used for the harmful acts.
To pen down, taking into the consideration of the safety of juvenile with a rise of social evils persisting in the environment the banning of entry and exits is not only the appropriate steps towards their better future. Other things such as limitation on social accounts, ban of alcohol and drug supply to youngsters and so on should also be taken into deliberation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, likewise, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 41.998997996 202% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92514634296 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592342342342 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.5662782946 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.588235294 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1176470588 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115617260824 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349455148709 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334785558713 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640313701234 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445002037897 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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