Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to inform you regarding a training course which I found to be useful for my career and the it's impact on my career prospective.
As you may know, the course which I am keen to take is about network security in modern data centers. This includes topics related to information security and how to secure the infrastructures in our company. It also contains a workshop in order to be familiar with various networking equipment and to obtain a concrete experience working with some high-end devices. The course I mentioned has a written and lab examination which leads to be a qualified network security engineer after successful completion of both.
I would be grateful if you could help me to be triumphant on this path. If you consider 2 days paid leave of absence each month, it would be a supreme opportunity for me to revise for my upcoming certification exams. There will be a exclusive meeting related to this session to get acquainted with many seasoned engineers from Cisco company. Students can become aware of the new updates about security concepts and also to correct their mistakes on the exam.
I would like to bring to your attention the fact that taking the previously mentioned course would be so beneficial for me and for our company. As it will make me a practiced network engineer and the troubleshooting's time and effort would be more precisely.
At the end, I would greatly appreciate it if you kindly give me your support towards obtaining the certificate and assisting me to turn to an excellent employee at the company.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
... I found to be useful for my career and the its impact on my career prospective. As ...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ming certification exams. There will be a exclusive meeting related to this sessi...
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Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'troubleshootings'' or 'troubleshooting's'?
Suggestion: troubleshootings'; troubleshooting's
...me a practiced network engineer and the troubleshootings time and effort would be more precisely...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87725631769 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86401975953 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6911607109 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279746832874 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950972180559 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650868099376 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153636797998 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379997372182 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.