You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. in your letter•Say what job you have applied for.•explain why you want this

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. in your letter
• Say what job you have applied for.
• explain why you want this job.
• Suggest what information the teacher should include.

Dear Sir,
Hope you are in the pink of your health. I am writing this letter to ask you for a reference letter which I need to apply for a job. since you know me from my school days so you can give an honest opinion about me. Let me explain in detail.
I have recently been offered a Supply Chain Manager job at one of the reputed organisation in Canada and I would like to accept the same. Moreover, I have been waiting for this opportunity from so long because it will not only open the new horizons of life for me but will give me a better future and job security as well. Additionally, I have experience in the same field and they want the person who is well aware of the advantages and disadvantages of the Indian market. Apart from the local market, I will be taking care of the EMEA region as well which I am excited to take up because it will be completely a new market to explore.
The company wants few details from my acquaintances like friends, family, teachers etc. so please mention all the details like my participation in the activities, debates, symposium, active participation in physical activities like sports, cultural fest organisations. please provide the details as per the attached format. you can also add since how long we both know each other.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Since
...letter which I need to apply for a job. since you know me from my school days so you ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...ke sports, cultural fest organisations. please provide the details as per the attached...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...the details as per the attached format. you can also add since how long we both kno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55833333333 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65826802428 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620833333333 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2375156214 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1538461538 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353018939896 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118437273393 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143565141569 0.0603063233224 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217512538217 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173946708172 0.0580467560999 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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