ou are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter:
Say what the problem is.
Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting.
Ask the provider to solve the problem.
Dear Sir,
My name is Ben and I am pursuing a Post Graduate program at South Asia University. before coming here, I have clearly stated my necessities and I was given assurance that those will be taken care of. however, things are entirely different. This is the main reason for writing the letter to express my dissatisfaction towards the apartment provided.
To start with, I have requested for single room accommodation and a small kitchen facility owing to the reason that I am a pure vegetarian. however, I had been offered a shared accommodation with no kitchen facility. Furthermore, my roommate is a hard-core non-vegetarian. Additionally, it was told that the accommodation will be service apartments with basic facilities like a pillow, quilt and bed-sheet. But none of these things was available.
Therefore, I would request you to change my accommodation as per the agreement before. I would be really grateful if you can take my request in consideration on an urgent basis.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Dennis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
...duate program at South Asia University. before coming here, I have clearly stated my n...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...the reason that I am a pure vegetarian. however, I had been offered a shared accommodat...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'shared accommodation'.
Suggestion: shared accommodation
...vegetarian. however, I had been offered a shared accommodation with no kitchen facility. Furthermore, ...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'apartment'?
Suggestion: apartment
...hat the accommodation will be a service apartments with basic facilities like a pillow, qu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, as to, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15606936416 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26807947877 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693641618497 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2245703676 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6153846154 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808286791717 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288301170133 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329279767634 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0326589971851 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274164202402 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.