You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some
problems with the internet connection in your room.
Write to the supervisor of your residence. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Inform him/her of the situation
Request that the problem be fixed
Dear Sir,
My name is Ben and I am a first-year student of Mass Communication. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction towards the internet service that has been provided in the campus.
To elucidate the problem, internet service is not working properly from the past few days. Speed is so slow that it takes almost a minute to open the Google main page. As I already mentioned that I am a Mass Media student and we have to keep ourselves updated about all the activities in the world. Also, I have the assignment to complete which cannot be completed without the research work and I would require the World Wide Web for the same. However, I called the technician to check the fault and he has suggested replacing the router as there is some signalling problem in the equipment.
I would request you to look into this issue and fix the problem at the earliest. Otherwise, I have to face the consequences by getting fewer grades in my assignment.
Looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested replacing'.
Suggestion: suggested replacing
...echnician to check the fault and he has suggested to replace the router as there is some signalling ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e signalling problem in the equipment. I would request you to look into this iss...
^
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun marks is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ave to face the consequences by getting less marks in my assignment. Hoping to get ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60220994475 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76223203704 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4236927597 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118156905583 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433085309791 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461473257479 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455341116809 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272068799913 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.