Some people believe that it is not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
In this scientific era of the 21st century where technology has taken everything by storm and is growing by leaps and bounds. Although there are few people who consider technologies like internet, smartphones etc. is a boon but on the same time, there are older generations also who believe that life can be spent well with our these inventions. However, I will explore both the dimensions of the topic and conclude it with my opinion.
To begin with, the internet is merely a form of technology that gives us access to a virtual world. It is a tool through which we can update ourselves about the new inventions, discoveries or what is going on in every corner of the world. However, we can rely on the internet to live our lives. Having said that means, being a social animal we need people around us to talk or to express our feelings that cannot be done with the technology. Moreover, people of older generations, before the invention of the internet, used to do every work and were hard working.
On the contrast, there are few antagonists who claim that the internet plays a crucial role in our life. People who are caught up in their busy world, with the use of the internet can talk to their loved ones who might be sitting in another part of the world, in different time zone. To cite an example, a person working abroad can connect to his family through video call in no time, without spending an enormous amount of money on tickets.
To conclude, I tend to believe that it totally depends on a person how to treat a technology, for some it is a blessing in a disguise but at the same time for few people, it is a complete waste of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48160535117 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51420500992 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2587675584 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118578989104 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444500974228 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025866454498 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698385245531 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218385832187 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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