Some people believe that it is not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Internet has evolved so much with years, that now, for a normal person, a day without it seems extremely difficult to spend. This essay will discuss how important is the Internet today and is it possible to enjoy life without it.
Today, everyone is using internet for almost every small thing. From buying groceries and clothes online to making payments, one needs Internet on a regular basis. For example, my son uses internet for his projects assignments given in schools. I handle most of the household chores and my work using Internet. My husband is busy surfing something or the other in the internet all the time. It has become a necessity more than an addiction. For most of the population, Internet serves as their bread and butter. The IT companies, hospitals, industries, etc. would shut down without the World Wide Web.
Whilst internet seems to be advantageous in so many ways for people, it has its demerits too. Firstly, Family Members, especially the younger generation, become so occupied and addicted to things like Social Media that they minimalize their interaction with the elderly. Secondly, it is often found that when a group of friends goes out, they are mostly busy with taking pictures and uploading them on social media rather than having fun with each another. Lastly, the illegal resources available with the Internet are in such a great number that it can easily spoil the teenagers and distract them from their usual good deeds.
In my opinion, however, despite the disadvantages it is impossible for a person to stop using Internet completely and live their life. Everything has its pros and cons. Taking a break from internet is a perfect idea for a short duration but quitting it completely would be a challenging situation in today’s world.
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...d shut down without the World Wide Web. Whilst internet seems to be advantageous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98996655518 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61673574488 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0329540368 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134185764486 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426380706643 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356650512455 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866584529371 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306475496445 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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