You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how

Essay topics:

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Mr John,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to have a fortnight off from work. To elucidate, as you are already aware of the fact that I am pursuing Masters in Supply Chain and I have my final exams coming in the next twenty days. I want some time to prepare for the exams and assignments to pass it with flying colours.
Further, ABC will take care of all my responsibilities for the work in my absence. Assuming that they would be supporting for these two weeks fulfilling my roles and responsibilities. however, if there is any meeting that is very important, I can attend it over a call. In addition, I will compensate for these holidays by extending my work hours and if required can work on weekends also to get all the work completed within the stipulated time as the project timelines are very tight. I realize my temporary absence will bring some inconvenience however, this credential can be helpful in implementing at work such as in evaluating supplier performance and vendor management.
Hoping to hear from you positively.
Yours sincerely,
Daniel

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...lfilling my roles and responsibilities. however, if there is any meeting that is very i...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73821989529 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92591940395 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633507853403 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5282837609 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308615044453 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10387269707 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678797108108 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184177894504 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711966539449 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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