You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. in your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greeting and I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirits. I am Peter Evans. I live in Wembley, London. I have done MBA from London business school in 2016 and I worked in Sainsbury for 2 years.
After high school, my keen interest was in business studies, so I enrolled in business management in graduation and masters. So, I am seeking a similar kind of job opportunity. The role, I prefer is more of client interactions and presentations on products or services majorly deals with sales. Planning strategies for increasing sales revenue, product development, adding and retaining the clients.
I worked as a business development executive. I am good at lead generations and customizing proposals for clients according to their requirements and organizing for client engagements. Please write me back for any suitable jobs relocation is not a problem for me. Satisfaction and job security is concern than salary. Looking forward to hearing back from you.
Your’s sincerely,
Peter Evans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Peter Evans. I live in Wembley, London. I have done MBA from London business scho...
^
Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
.... Please write me back for any suitable jobs relocation is not a problem for me. Sat...
^^^^
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Your's sincerely, Peter Evans.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10474621118 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709090909091 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3166264853 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0714285714 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7857142857 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144166127024 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424633854003 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413974369721 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886505432636 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483857339211 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.