You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how

Essay topics:

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.

Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.

Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Sir,

I am yusuf Patel and working as an accountant in your department. I am writing this letter to grant me some days off to complete my left out course in "Advance accounting and taxation".

I had enrolled in above curriculum before joined the company and could not finished during tenure as job was priority at that time. Now I want to accomplish it and therefore I need a short duration vacation from duty to catch from where i left. I require four weeks off and in my absent, my colleague Kirt will take care of my profile as I have transferred him essential information to smooth the operation of office works.

As you aware that in the recent time, the government has applied new tax collection system in form of GST and this needs deep knowledge to operat account activities. this study covers this newly deployed pattern and definately help to make easy for our entire department and ultimately for the organization. I can give training to other mates in the office on successful completion.

I look forward to here and approve my request.

Yours sincerely,

yusuf patel

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dvance accounting and taxation'. I had enrolled in above curriculum before...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'finish'
Suggestion: finish
...before joined the company and could not finished during tenure as job was priority at th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... vacation from duty to catch from where i left. I require four weeks off and in m...
^
Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...knowledge to operat account activities. this study covers this newly deployed patter...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87368421053 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85003280343 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705263157895 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5025805736 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193780952233 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554152374898 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416218525019 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828668364041 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552449666475 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.