Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away”
culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many
plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what
extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you
recommend reducing this problem?
some people would argue that financial benefit is the key factor behind choosing a profession, where others would disagree. I strongly agree that salary is considered to be the top priority in choosing a job and this essay will elaborate on this.
A growing body of research suggests that financial benefit is the driving factor behind most of the job application. In other words, employees usually look at the salary package beforehand to be ensured that their expectations will be met. even when mid-career professionals switch to another company, the only thing they would never compromise is monthly remuneration. For example, an online survey conducted by world Economic Forum shows that in India, 85% young people have marked higher wages as the reason behind selecting any particular career path while 82% employees in officer rank have confirmed that they would prefer to work for entities who pay higher despite any drawbacks.
On the other hand, some believe that passion plays a key role in the professional choices. To elaborate, people go for the occupation that will give them mental satisfaction and will full fill their interest in that field of work. For instance, artists are usually low paid and they would still sacrifice any other high-paid job offer as long as they are satisfied with their artistic aspiration. However, these are exceptional cases and in many situations, even artists choose to apply for a corporate position due to financial security.
To conclude, in this modern world salary attracts people most in choosing a job. Although a passion for a profession may play a significant role in some people’s career choices, it cannot sustain in the long run without monetary support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19642857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72430247579 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7919520541 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0688392444697 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255988603639 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231774576317 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494796908282 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228486426734 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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