You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the quality and taste of the meal we ordered.
Last week I along with my family members visited your restaurant “The Meridian” to celebrate the 25th Wedding Anniversary of my parents.
We ordered Black Pepper Chicken, Butter Garlic Noodles and Fruit Beer. Though the ambience of the restaurant was very beautiful with perfect lighting an music, the meal that we ordered was under cooked. Not only the taste of the chicken was good but also the noodles were very spicy. Due to this we were not able to enjoy the food and overall everyone was not happy.
I would like you to consider my issue and take necessary actions. Additionally, please give proper guidance and training to the chefs to cook food properly and to use fresh vegetables and chicken, so that people do not suffer from any infections an everyone enjoy their meal in yur restaurant.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...25th Wedding Anniversary of my parents. We ordered Black Pepper Chicken, Butter ...
Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
...as very beautiful with perfect lighting an music, the meal that we ordered was und...
Line 9, column 247, Rule ID: DT_PRP
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'everyone'?
Suggestion: an; everyone
...eople do not suffer from any infections an everyone enjoy their meal in yur restaurant. ...
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98245614035 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65428798187 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643274853801 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.921853574 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184754378489 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654203287084 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293094406769 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877428155495 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128524839696 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.