You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• describe the training course you want to do
• explain what the company could do to help you
• say how the course will be useful for your job
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your knowledge about the training course titled “Global marketing access” advertised in Hindustan Times. I would like to seek your permission to participate in this program.
The training program will take place from 20 September to 23 September in Mumbai in Radisson Hotel. The cost of attending the seminar inclusive of the hotel and meal is Rs 3000. Some of the well-known experts in international marketing around the world to speak on marketing and how to have a global reach.
I would like to request you to kindly provide me with the necessary approvals, documentations and email confirmations for attending the training session in Mumbai. Since our company is planning to expand globally and to have the global market of our product it will benefit with high customer retention and growth and moreover the company will earn long term profits
The training program will enrich my knowledge and expertise, furthermore, it will answer many of my questions such as how to have a global reach? how to promote the product internationally? How to attract customers? Clearly it will aid me not only in my professional life but also in building a successful career
I hope you will grant me the permission to attend the training session in Mumbai and if you could consider reimbursing the amount spend for attending the training program.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Prabhpreet Kaur
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...hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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...on. Yours sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11836734694 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92141698801 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567346938776 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9014390445 44.8134815571 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.5 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252209572803 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768468731152 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560810089221 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119001973222 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062539449298 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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