You have recently visited a museum Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited Write a letter to him her In your letter write where you went what you saw there how you felt about it You should write at least 150 words

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You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited.

Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write:

- where you went

- what you saw there

- how you felt about it

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Anna,

Hello, how are you? I am writing this letter to share the wonderful experience I had when I visited a museum during my trip to Singapore.

Last month, I along with my family planned our two-week holiday to Singapore which is a small island. It is not only famous for being the cleanest country in the world but also has many famous tourist attractions such as Universal Studios, Singapore Flyer, Gardens by the Bay, Night Safari, Birds Park and many more. We had great fun there enjoying the exotic sea food, shopping, and Singapore cruise.

On the sixth day of our trip we visited the National Museum of Singapore. Initially, I thought that it’s going to be monotonous but to my surprise I was astounded by the architectural beauty of the museum. Its was humongous and the nation’s oldest museum that seeks to inspire with the stories of Singapore and the world. Moreover, It depicted the history of Singapore from the 14th century in a story-telling approach with Images and film projected on its 15-metre high cylindrical walls.

As you know in my school days, I used to hate studying history but after visiting the National museum of Singapore I developed a keen interest in exploring the historical events of other countries as well. It was an enlightening trip where we developed the understanding of history of Singapore with so much ease without being bored.

I would recommend you to plan a trip to Singapore and do visit the National Museum of Singapore. It will be loved by you and your family.

Hope to see you soon, Take care.

With love,

Prabhpreet Kaur

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake care. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, well, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85454545455 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73075172044 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6844288637 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18509902395 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732581174219 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074742660799 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131385046335 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098912567365 0.0580467560999 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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