You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:» explain why you were at the restaurant» describe the problems» write a

Essay topics:

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.

Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:

» explain why you were at the restaurant

» describe the problems

» write about the action you want the manager to take

Dear Manager,

I am Sarika, I am one of your frequent customers to your downtown branch shalimar restaurant. Recently on this Sunday we had plan to visit your restaurant. We heard from our close friend that you have added new meals plans in your menu and we were excited to try that.

When we arrived to your restaurant we found no one was available to take our orders. After half an hour a waitress came to take our orders and she was very rude to explain what is new added in the menu list. We were very disappointed by the way they welcomed us. Also the food tasted not so delicious.

I would like to get a compensation for our order and I would like to get free meals for our next visit.I hope you will have a closer look to this issue and get back to us as soon as possible.

Kind Regrads

Sarika

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am Sarika, I am one of your frequent c...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and we were excited to try that. When we arrived to your restaurant we found ...
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Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...sappointed by the way they welcomed us. Also the food tasted not so delicious. ...
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Line 13, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ke to get free meals for our next visit.I hope you will have a closer look to thi...
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Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as soon as possible. Kind Regrads Sarika
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33548387097 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28159171852 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651612903226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1259404459 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16024187335 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604532636567 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047355206721 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986630536565 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055354462367 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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