Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk aboutExplain why would they be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

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Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:

Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about

Explain why would they be of interest to the students

Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

Dear Headteacher,

I am writing in express to ask for permission to give a speech that I am preparing to speak in front of the students of the college as an audience on the specific date of international day for a good cause. Let me elaborate in details.

To be more specific, Our country has given the golden opportunities to the incoming students of various countries to explore the world education. Basically, on the special national occasion, college has organised a small function. So, I have also decided to participate and speak on the topic "university in diversity". Likely, the topic will emphasis the students the value of the study and facilities the native country offer to them. Also, it pinpoints the way country has unity of diverse type of peopld without any discrimination,cast and tribes.However, the crucial points will be how the myriad of student people interact with each other and share same culture and education under one roof irrespective of caste and sex.Whilst on the downside, the main highlignts will be the most of the students who feel ambiguous and interrogative to the largest services and peculiar features provided by the education ministery of the country to the multinational students.

additionally, a significant number of students have basic ethics and patriotism towards other country.Besides this, for their general awareness as well as making them knowledgeable about how the country has welcomed the different multilanguage speaking people to their country.

Lastly, I would like you to favour me some data list of the international students as well as some other information that will make my speech strong and valuable.

I shall look forward to the reply from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Yasmin kaur.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, lastly, look, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 937.175257732 159% => OK
No of words: 284.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25704225352 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23414103289 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 290.88556701 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.499814864 44.8134815571 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.727272727 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15147069975 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493412064662 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252803277205 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752622912401 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119740218495 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 8.37731958763 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 41.2886597938 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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