Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear John,
I apologize that I won't be able to join you for a movie today. I am really sorry that I need to cancel our movie plan for some reason. Actually, my cat got saviour injury today in the afternoon. I need to take her to the doctor and I have to stay with her as she might not feel good after her treatment.
I asked Nafas one of our classmates to go with you. She doesn't have any other plan for today's evening. She is happy to go with you. She will see you at the front door of cineplex at 6:30 pm.
I feel Nafas will be the right person to join you for movie night as we know her well. Also, she is very entertaining and friendly. We have done many assignments together and as we group of their like each other company. I hope you guys will have fun and like the movie.
I am again sorry to cancel this plan without early notice. Don't forget to tell me how did you like the movie.
Kind regards
Sarika
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e of our classmates to go with you. She doesnt have any other plan for todays evening....
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s evening. She is happy to go with you. She will see you at the front door of cinep...
^^^
Line 17, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
... cancel this plan without early notice. Dont forget to tell me how did you like the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, really, so, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13661202186 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02126708248 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2425018577 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.4666666667 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205989972867 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749195834166 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727239914629 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126377902666 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544021371712 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.84 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.