Some people warn that the era of silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema.
Do you agree or disagree with this view?
Watching latest movies at the cinema has always been considered as an important entertainment especially during winter where outdoor activities are very minimal. While some people think that in the near future the cinema will be closed since due to the advances in technology all films can be seen at home. I still believe that it should always be present since it has a big social impact.
On the first hand, there are many reasons why screen sliver is coming to her end. Firstly, the easy accessibility for DVD, even the latest ones that you can find in any shop. In addition, recently we have noticed that you can put a surrounding system at your home so you will have the same impact as Cinema do. Secondly, you will have the option to move your Cinema at home and this is very convenient those days. In fact, due to the stressful condition of our daily life we don't have enough time to seek the cinema. For instance, lots of friends would rather prefer to meet at home instead of going out to watch movies.
On the other hand, I still believe that cinema should always be present for many factors. Starting with the direct effect that the cinema has on each person such as giant screen, lighting and sounds impacts which are not able to be done at home. In addition, we should also mention the quite environment that cinema offers whereas it couldn't be seen at home due to family interventions. Moving on to another major effect the social behavior. Actually, when we go to the cinema we usually meet before or after to have lunch or dinner as a result, communication are better and people are very close to each other’s. For example, during weekend most of mall will be filled with people and this will impact positively on the society.
To conclude, while it is true that watching movies at home is a new habit that is reflecting negatively on the silver screen. I agree, that its presence will be always important for social reasons and behavioral impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.03092783505 429% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 937.175257732 175% => OK
No of words: 351.0 206.0 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66381766382 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41903327443 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 127.690721649 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 290.88556701 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.0555314014 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2941176471 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6470588235 4.34317383033 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19915740825 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629859054506 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477628419602 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116076543652 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361583240195 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.